Claire Adams What stayed with me is this: a tighter version might feel more dramatic, but I would probably miss how the image never rushes to explain itself. I would not push it further.
单看这一点,有个小地方挺抓我:效果没有一下做满,情绪反而留得更久。它不抢眼,但会把视线重新带回整体气氛。 这部分不需要再额外解释。
@宋知微: 沿着前面的观察,接着上面那条看,第一眼和第二眼落下的位置不一样确实会影响观看顺序,不只是一个装饰细节。 我更偏向现在这个分寸。
What stayed with me is this: a tighter version might feel more dramatic, but I would probably miss how the image never rushes to explain itself. I would not push it further.