Ava Parker A small observation: small thing, but the eye does not land in the same place twice. That was the detail that held my attention. The restraint is the point.
最安静的区域反而把整体串了起来。我会好奇另一个版本如果减少边缘信息,情绪会不会变得更紧。 停下来看的时候才会明显。
@秦墨言: 这个说法提醒了我,上面说得有道理,不过把视觉中心再强调一点之后未必更好;现在最安静的区域反而把整体串了起来留下的余地刚好。 所以我觉得现在这样就够了。
细看会发现,有个小地方挺抓我:视线不是直奔中心,而是会稍微绕一下。它不抢眼,但会把视线重新带回观看顺序。 这种分寸其实挺难拿。
@乔安宁: 顺着这条再看,这个提醒挺有用。顺着观看顺序看下去,最安静的区域反而把整体串了起来会变得更明显。 回去看一遍会更明显。
A small observation: small thing, but the eye does not land in the same place twice. That was the detail that held my attention. The restraint is the point.