Daniel Qian The more I sit with it, a tighter version might feel more dramatic, but I would probably miss how the smaller choices all lean toward the same mood. I would not push it further.
单看这一点,第一眼和第二眼的感受不太一样。先是整体气氛,随后才注意到画面没有急着解释自己,层次是在后面出来的。 换个观看顺序,感受应该会不一样。
The more I sit with it, a tighter version might feel more dramatic, but I would probably miss how the smaller choices all lean toward the same mood. I would not push it further.
再看一遍,完成度没什么问题,不过真正有记忆点的还是整体气氛:细节都在往同一个情绪方向走。 第一遍确实容易略过。